Sample student essay by Brian

This essay was about comparing and conrasting two ads triggered on Alcohol. He talks about how one brings in the audience by color and to attract women whereas the other was to have you picture yourself drinking the product. He makes a good opening points about addiction, which may lead to rehabilitation centers. This brings the reader in to focus on the ads and what he has to say about them. I like how he wrote the essay comparing/contrasting the two ads. I think he did a good job doing this in the essay showing evidence and personal thought based on the ads.