Annotated bibliography and Critical Preface

The critical preface comes first and Hannah talks about how art programs in schools is extremely important. She includes the relevance and importance of her research in the preface. Then she ask's questions that describe the overview of the content of the research. Then she summarizes an overview of the research so far. That is what makes up the critical preface, and the annotated bibliography is next. This is basically a works cited page, but after the source is cited, you give a short insight about the content of each source. A short paragraph should be extensive enough of a summary.
I think that Hannah did a pretty good job on this critical preface except at the end she should have added a strategy for further research. In the annotated bibliography, she did everything well and summarized the articles for each of her sources.