Monday, June 4, 2012

Alice Essay

Alice's essay makes an attempt to discuss unemployment insurance benefits. She explains how unemployment is unfortunate, and not always controlled by a person, but rather out of their control. So many factors play a role in reasons why one might become unemployed. After becoming unemployed, if that weren't enough, it leads to many other tragedies like depression or even addiction. Unemployment insurance should not be abolished, but should be relied on less. Only those who really need it should get it. This would promote many to get a job instead of being handed insurance. This would help the poverty problem and decrease the unemployment rate drastically

Friday, June 1, 2012

What To Do about Taxes

This essay "What To Do about Taxes" is about the benefits and struggles taxes may cause. I think this essay is written well and has good show and tell. This was a good essay example 3 to show to the class.

Alice Essay

This essay written by a student on Unemployment Insurance Benefits. It provides tension and is full of research as well as arguments that she backs up with opinions and current evidence. Overall I liked the essay and it helped show me structure in a way.